louis this is for you boards but everyone should read along.
It looks like you had fun, you got a little carried away with going to the end but yeah, Portlyn's right I was wondering what happened to the window shots.
anyhow. Nice work the second half seems better to me than the first half. You started drawing boldly and quick. Nice sharpee work. for all of you, you want to use sharpees or pen. You do not want to use pencil.
Thumbnails are a direct link to gesture drawing and you want to treat them as such. You find that you don't have to draw the whole background in thumbnails. the main concerns in action boards should primarily be
choreography and Acting
Choreography helps tell the action, and clear acting tells the story within it.
you all want to have clear acting because action without acting is just action which equals boring.
these boards arent boring because you put a lot into the acting. Good stuff.
wow you went all the way till the end. AWESOME!!! it was supposed to stop at when he falls out the window, but whatever. NICE!
ReplyDeleteoh oops haha i didn't know that
ReplyDeletewait i just realized the "falling out the window" boards are missing... whaaaat! aaah sorry dave :(
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ReplyDeletethis is for you boards but everyone should read along.
It looks like you had fun,
you got a little carried away with going to the end but yeah, Portlyn's right I was wondering what happened to the window shots.
anyhow. Nice work
the second half seems better to me than the first half. You started drawing boldly and quick. Nice sharpee work. for all of you, you want to use sharpees or pen. You do not want to use pencil.
Thumbnails are a direct link to gesture drawing and you want to treat them as such. You find that you don't have to draw the whole background in thumbnails. the main concerns in action boards should primarily be
choreography and Acting
Choreography helps tell the action, and clear acting tells the story within it.
you all want to have clear acting because action without acting is just action which equals boring.
these boards arent boring because you put a lot into the acting. Good stuff.
lastly, dont draw them so big haha.
haha thanks dave!
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