Story Cardio_002, Portlynn Tagavi (Gave it another go)

Hey Dave!!! I did the assignment again, this time a stayed within the time limits and i stuck to the guidelines. Last time i forgot about the character wanting something from the other, but not this time!!! i made sure.

So here it is. I choose Dracula and Dog at the Park. The Dog wants Dracula's Blood Sausage. I did it in 3 hours and i tried to make it clearer than the last one. I hope it succeeded!!!

Thanks for looking!!!

Story Cardio_001, Portlynn Tagavi

Hey Guys!!! I did one for the Story Cardio. I will not lie, i did this in 4 hours not 3, it proved to be a real challenge. I plan on doing one or two more (different stories) soon that are in the actual time limit, but i felt that this was worth putting up anyway.  I had a lot of fun with this, and i'm excited to work on some more stories for the other combinations!

This is a Romance kind of...

I chose Circus Performer, and Rodeo Cowboy at an Amusement Park (made most sense...).

I hope it's clear. I had a lot of fun trying to create suspense with the shot cutting, but i'm wondering if that worked or if there is another way i could have created suspense.

I also feel that my shot variation was weak, and that my attention to where the characters where on screen made for some confusing moments, tell me if you agree, or if it reads fine to you?

Ok... DO YOU WORST...